The Lost Prince

Once upon a time, there was a kingdom named Kahana, the King of Kahana was discriminated poor people, he only gave attention to rich people. One day, the Queen got pregnant, the King and all of kingdom occupant were very happy. The kingdom made a party to celebrate their happiness, but the king invited only the rich people. They did not invite the poor people. The king assumed that the poor people will give a bad impact to their baby.

After nine month of the pregnancy, the Queen gave a birth. There were twin handsome baby. The king named them John and Paul.

When John and Paul were seven years old, the King took along both of them to camp in the jungle for three days. They hunted animals, camped, and enjoyed the scenery of one of the volcano mountain near the kingdom. In the morning of the third day, the King woke up and very surprised because there was only John who still slept on his place. Paul was lost.

Paul was fall to the ravine when he looked for river to take a piss on the night. He fell down because he did not see the way on the darkness. He just followed the water’s sounds of the river near his tent. He felt down to the ravine and carried by the stream of the river. The kingdom was very mourned the loss of Paul. They tried to send their soldier to search Paul, but they did not get anything. After a three-day searching, the king assumed that Paul was died eaten by wild animals.

On the next morning, the stonemason who lived near the river found Paul unconsciousness under banana trees. He helped and brought Paul to his house. When Paul became conscious, he asked “Who are you?” “Where are you from?”, but Paul was only silent.  Paul did not remember anything what happened to him.  Therefore, Paul was carried by stonemason family, his activity everyday was on the jungle of the mountain to look for stone and rend it in order to on sale to make money, until he became a teenager.

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John who lived in the kingdom was trained hard by his father to be prince who good at fighting because his father wanted him to mastering this world. One day, the kingdom arranged a fought contest with a very big prize. There were a tens people registered to join the contest, including Paul, because he wanted to help his foster parents to increase their revenue.

Fought by fought passed, and the final is a fought between John and Paul. Paul became a strong person because of his habit that lived on the jungle of the mountain and accustomed to a hard work. The fought run fiercely and last very long. Suddenly the Queen shouted “Stoopp!!” The Queen tried to approach Paul and said “My son! You are my son! Paul!”.

Finally all of people there knew that Paul was the twin of John who lost when he was seven years old. The Queen asked “My son, please come back to the kingdom and you will be a prince” but Paul answered “No, my parents are the stonemason, they who has been carried me until I become an adult and I happy live with them” but the Queen still forced Paul to back to the kingdom.

Finally Paul wanted to live in the kingdom with some requirements that his foster parents, the stonemason also lived in the kingdom, the King must be fair and wise to all of resident, and not discriminate between rich and poor people. The king agreed with Paul’s requirements and the kingdom became very peaceful and happy with harmonious residence under the leadership of twin handsome prince, John and Paul.

Between Two Doors

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                After considering both of the consequences of the doors he chose left door. He expected that inside the door was a lion, because he did not want to marry another girl except the king’s daughter. He was ready to take any risks facing the lion.

                He walked slowly to the door and opened it.  There was a huge lion inside. He was surprised and very scared. He wanted to run, but an awkward moment happened, the lion look very limp ‘because of the circus show last night’. Then, the soldier tried to approach the lion and asked “Are you hungry?” “Yes, the king didn’t give me any foods for the last two weeks.” the lion answered. “Oh, so pity you are.” the soldier said.

                Suddenly, the soldier had an idea to exploited that opportunity by persuaded the lion to kill the king. The lion agreed with his offers. Then, both of them cooperated to kill the king. After the king was killed, the soldier announced around the people who came there that he loved the king’s daughter so much and he wanted to marry her.

                Two days later, finally the soldier married to the king’s daughter. They also took cared the lion as their pet and gave name “Jago”. The soldier and his little family lived happily ever after.

The Patience Process of Writing

The Patience Process of Writing

Writing is an activity that everyone able to do it. Even children who are still in Elementary School, they are able to write. But of course the writing outcomes of children and experienced person are different. To be a good writer is not simple. There are some of important points that should be considered in writing. The first one is “brainstorming”, the process of finding the ideas of what would be write. Next step is “mind mapping” our idea. It is a strategy for making notes on a topic, prior to writing. Then we have to do “drafting”, the process of writing down ideas, organizing them into a sequence, and providing the reader with a frame for understanding these ideas. After that is “finalizing” process, it refers to the process of editing and revising based on an evaluation of the writing. The last process is called “proofreading”, so our writings read by someone else and they give us their argument on our writings.

 So, the wise way to be a good writer is read more and keep patient to read often. Because writing is fun, we can share our knowledge with each other by write and share it in our Blog like this. J